Blues in the Closet

Wednesday, January 17, 2007

Buck, Charlie Parker, death and Mamet

As Pokey sat in his ticket booth, taking the last of the park-n-ride tickets for the morning, he recalled how he did not like how the day began. Pokey's apartment was near the atrium and as he ate his morning cereal, he heard the massive truck arrive in front of the building. It settled itself in front of the lobby doors, belching and puffing in the morning air. It was bad enough to awaken in the middle of the night by the familar pacing of the upstairs neighbor. Pokey wasn't really clear who actually lived above him. Pokey really only knows those who either have a car in the garage or make an effort to speak with him.
Pokey couldn't fall back to sleep without listening to his music. The record player was too far away from his bed, so he used his cd player. Yet Pokey did not like wearing his headphone in the dead of night. He had once mentioned to his mother that the only way he could fall back to sleep was to play his music. His mother scolded him.
"Pokey, those cords can wrap around your neck and the next thing you know, I'll be arranging your funeral."
Pokey was frighten by the thought of death. Death seems like the strange brush on his shoulder as he went to the roof to feed scraps to the pigeons. He felt this brush the same day he found a dead pigeon on the roof. He only went to the roof because Ms. Keller, the absent-minded old woman in the building asks him from time to time--when she can remember his name, or where she put the bread crumbs. Mostly, the bread crumbs remain in the hall, down the stairs, and some trail down the street only to be sullied by passers-by.
As he left his apartment, the movers were taking-up the entire lobby with furniture of all shapes and sizes. The comingling of stale cigars, fecund wallpaper and something Pokey couldn't name, confused him as he tried to escape into the street. Instead he was trapped at the hall entrance until the elevator arrived and the movers grunted past.
Pokey dashed out the lobby door only to colllide with the other two movers manipulating an ornate setee toward the door.
He adjusts the last of the tickets, brushes off his thermos, picks up a plastic bag, carefully locks his booth, and quickly walks into the shop to see Buck. Pokey was afraid of Leo, but constant as a bass note, Buck's tail would thump when he saw Pokey approach. Pokey awkwardly taps Buck's large, square, brindled head as Buck pokes his head into the plastic bag.
Leo starts from his fitful sleep, sees Pokey, grunts, and closes his eyes again. Once Buck finishes he sits next to Pokey and patiencely lets him continue to pat his head. Pokey absently hums a Charlie Parker tune. After ten minutes, Pokey tells Buck good-bye and heads back to his booth.
Outside his booth, Mr. Mamet is pacing and talking on his cell phone. When he sees Pokey he impatiently gestures for his keys and points Pokey towards the garage. Pokey quickly finds the keys, put on his car gloves, and jogs off to get Mr. Mamet's car. Pokey always wore his car gloves when getting a car. He only wore these gloves when retrieving cars.
Mr. Mamet waived Pokey out of the car, shoves a five into the glove before Pokey had a chance to remove his glove. Pokey stands and stares down into the ruppled bill in his hand. Mamet absently waves at Pokey as he drives off. Pokey is startled that Mr. Mamet is in such a rush. Usually, he waits patiently for Pokey to either put on his gloves or take them off. Pokey wonders if Mr. Mamet was upset by the morning moving truck as well. He walks out to the front of the garge and notices that the truck is still parked out front.
"That's why he's upset." Pokey mumbles to himself. "That truck is in the way." As Pokey turns, he finds his headphones and Duke Ellington's "Mood Indigo" starts. Pokey settles into his booth, arranges the tickets and checks the keys lined on their hooks, closes it and locks them. He puts the key into his jacket. The music mutes the cars that hiss by his window. He settles to watch the day go by.

3 Comments:

  • At 5:55 AM, Blogger Casey H. said…

    Everett's apartment was similar in style to the men's parlour of a country club. His dark green walls were covered in black and white photographs of his younger self with friends and family. There were two leather arm chairs separated by a small wooden table with a lamp and ash tray. Two large bookshelves lined his walls. Each was filled with a variety of books, magazines, and photo albums. On the bottom shelf of one of the bookshelves was a sizable stack of incomplete manuscripts.
    Not far from his living room was a small dining area with small yet heavy looking tables and chairs. A semi-completed crossword puzzle lay in front of Everett as he sat in the chair facing the window. He leaned close in, his thick-rimmed reading glasses only a few inches from the paper. He worked diligently for another 15 minutes until it was almost full. Saving the last few answers for later, Everett took off his reading glasses and rose from the table. As he walked to the door he tucked the rest of his newspaper under his arm and locked his door behind him.
    In the hallway, Everett spotted his neighbor, Artie, cornered by Mr. Wok. He couldn't quite make out what Mr. Wok was saying at first but as he moved closer he heard something about Mrs. Wok's nail salon. As Artie listened she seemed to be battling fatigue and at times having trouble understanding through the thick accent.
    When Everett got closer to the two he said, "Oh, Good Evening Artie. I uh, I'm so glad you're back. Thanks so much for watching my Iguana for me. I'll take her back now, she's probably homesick anyways."
    Everett herded Artie into the door and gave a friendly nod in Mr. Wok's direction. Once inside the door, Everett spotted the everpresent grey smudge on Artie's cheek. She looked through the peephole and smiled. All of the tenants of Thallow Flats loved Mr. Wok dearly but at the wrong time, Mr. Wok's conversational stamina could be overwhelming. Artie walked to the back room of her apartment and returned carrying a small clear tank.
    "Alrighty, here you are. Connie behaved very well. No trouble at all. "
    "Thanks a million. I didn't want the poor girl to freeze. Luckily, the heat in my place got fixed this morning," said Everett taking the tank from Artie.
    "Well I'll see you around Mr. Carson," said Artie opening the door.
    "And remember," said Everett, "I want to know when you're having another one of your shows. An old man like me needs nice things to look at."
    Everett returned to his apartment, placed Connie's tank in the corner, and went back out the door. Once in the elevator, Everett detected a very distinct, expensive smelling cologne. He recalled the day before as the young man with the slick hair directed the fat movers with his ornate furniture.
    Leaving Thallow Flats, Everett walked in the direction of the diner. While he enjoyed walking during the evening, sometimes the smells wafting over from the ethnic food store made him lose his appetite. Everett couldn't help but smile thinking of the recent additions to the neighborhood: the ethnic food store, root emporium, and fortune teller. He couldn't even recall such places existing when he was young.
    Entering the diner, Everett opened his newspaper. He took the arts and entertainment section with a special feature on jazz and took it to Pokey's booth nearby. Removing one ear of his headphones, Pokey muttered a soft "thank you" and Everett took his stool at the counter. He unfolded the rest of his newspaper and began to finish the crossword puzzle he had started that morning.

     
  • At 7:38 AM, Blogger alex said…

    It is early evening and Mirela treads around the room, pulling the lamp chains and blowing the candles out. It has been a long interesting day at work. She travels down the steep set of stairs, using the splintery railing as her guide. After bidding Mrs. Ryan and Harold goodbye, she pulls the thick wooden door shut behind her and sets out for #725 of the Thallow Flats ( a small space she likes to call "home")

    On her last stretch of block Mirela notices a figure across the street nervously fiddling with a head set and player. The young man then approaches the cross walk and presses the orange button three times; the WALK sign blinks on. The boyish man studies his possessions and surroundings, while uttering underneath his breath and nodding his head, possibly making a mental checklist. He looks both ways, steps out between the thick, faded lines of the crosswalk, and begins to cross with his head in a down-turned position.

    Mirela stands motionless, just feet from the dull bronze doors of the Thallow Flats. She is absorbed in observation, processing every minute detail of this man's being, while writing his story in her mind the entire time. Realizing that she is staring, though she doubts the man notices, Mirela turns toward the entrance of the flats. She takes half a step and then glances over her shoulder to get one last glimpse of this odd stranger. At that very second, his bag rips open and the contents spill onto the dusty, gray concrete. Wool socks, flannel shirts, galoshes, and thermal wear all fall into a messy unorganized pile of winter clothing. The man begins to frantically collect his clothes with a clenched jaw and reddened cheeks. He could not pick up his belongings fast enough. Mirela was already standing over him with kind eyes. She bends down and picks up a pair of wooly socks and holds them out to him like an offering. He quietly accepts the socks, only making a few seconds of shifty eye contact.



    "Hi, I'm Mirela. Do you need a hand? I have an extra bag you can borrow."


    Mirela began to pull a cloth grocery bag out of her gigantic purse.


    "Um, No. I'm fine."


    He begins to pick up each item and stuffs them underneath his arm. It is obvious that he isn't going to be able to carry everything, so Mirela stands her ground.


    "Here, just use the bag. I can come pick it up later. Are you in a hurry?"


    "No, it's just that I can't let these clothes out of my hands until I get to my room and it's getting dark and mom doesn't like me to-"


    He stopped his fast paced stream of words mid statement as Mirela unfolded his hand, placing the bag onto his palm.


    "It's no big deal. I live in room #725. Oh, and I never asked you your name."


    He gazed into Mirela's gentle eyes with astonishment.


    "I'm Pokey. Um, thank you."


    And with that, Mirela was off to enjoy the nearing sunset.

     
  • At 9:11 AM, Blogger Janet said…

    Madame Mirela Foquois
    Mirela lounged on the roof with her feet propped on the edge. Dusk was steadily setting in, but her glass of wine was still half full and what was the point of drinking if not to enjoy it and take it all in.

    Her lips formed a half smile as she watched the street lamps flicker on and make the streets glow orange. Behind her the pigeons took flight leaving downy feathers floating in the crisp air.

    As she finished her glass of wine, her hairs began to stand on end. She turned to leave , but the cage door clanged open and the doves flew in her face chasing away the rest of the sunset's peace.

    She ran inside to escape her feeling of unrest when she ran head on into Pokey.

    "Oh, sorry," Mirela gasped.

    "Uh, um, it's fine. I, uh, I just wanted to return your bag, but you weren't home, so I came to feed Ms. Keller's birds." Pokey explained haultingly.

    "Thank you, I almost forgot about that." Mirela said as she reached for the bag in Pokey's outstreched hand.

    "Um, I'm not sure how to ask this." Mirela ventured causiously, but Pokey only looked confused.

    "But do you know of anything. . .bad happening up here." Mirela finished.

    "When I first moved here, my mom told me to stay away from the roof. Some girl tried to fly away with the birds." Pokey explained.

     

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